Revising

The writing process is much more than just getting words on the page; what you do after the words are there is often the most important part of writing. This process of working with the text you already have is called revision.

Revision = Re - Vision

The root of the word is important for understanding what revision means. It’s much more than a matter of simple proofreading or copyediting. It’s also a matter of really revisioning or reseeing what you’ve written.

These two aspects or phases of revising are frequently discussed in terms of revising both:

  1. higher order concerns: issues that affect meaning, argument, and the overall effectiveness of the text
  2. lower order concerns: problems that only compromise a given phrase or section of a text such as grammar concerns, spelling, or awkward phrasing

Global revision describes revisions aimed at improving higher order concerns.

Sentence-level or local revision describes revision that improves lower order concerns.

For specific revision guidelines, see:

Simple Steps to Successful Revision, by Catherine Coleman
Higher Order Concerns (HOCs) and Lower Order Concerns (LOCs), from OWL at Purdue
Revision Guidelines, from David Callon
Revision Handout, from University of North Carolina, Chapel Hill
Global Revision Page, from University of Virginia Writing Program

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Created by Liberty Smith. Last updated: April 24, 2006.

The work of an intellectual is not to shape others' political will; it is, through the analyses that he carries out in his own field, to question over and over again what is postulated as self-evident, to disturb people's mental habits, the way they do and think things. -- Michel Foucault